Wednesday Snippets {3}: The Arrival


This week's snippet has us meeting Kacee, the Dormitory C assistant. While the older girl seems to have a connection with Marie, Leah isn't so sure.   Enjoy!

So I gave in, just like I always did when my sister turned on the heat. Which is how I found myself lugging my lone suitcase up two flights of stairs to what I’d been told was Dormitory C. The stark white walls and faded green linoleum barely registered as I followed Marie, who for the first time in recent history was babbling like a chimpanzee. She obviously felt a connection to the young woman guiding us. Marie was like that. She had some sorta of super sense for other kids who were like her. She was a super-genius magnet, while I on the other hand found myself surrounded by boys more often than not, since I didn’t care for dresses, make-up or any of that girly-girl stuff. I was comfortable in my own skin.

Still I hadn’t expected Mrs. Brindle to just up and abandon us when we arrived, after the concern she’d shown at Mrs. Leham’s. But when we’d arrived on campus, she’d been greeted a grumpy looking man who insisted that she had matters to attend to, barely giving Mrs. Brindle time to line up a replacement to take us to what was going to be our new home until we aged out of the system. Less than five minutes later, she’d pulled the dormitory assistant out of class and left us in Kacee Pope’s capable hands. I wasn’t sure what to think of the slender red-head. She seemed nice enough. Chatting up Marie like an old friend while trying to involve me in their conversation about some upcoming science fair.

“Here we are.” Kacee tossed her long braid over her shoulder. “This is the girls side. The boys are across the hall and two doors down. After nine o’clock there is no fraternization with them but we do share a common room and kitchen area with them. Don’t let Aaron trick you into doing KP. He’s perfectly capable of washing dishes despite being in a wheel chair.” She winked, before ushering us inside. “You two can have the last two beds closest to the window.” She gestured two two beds on the far end of the room.

Long but narrow, the room had a total of eight beds lining one wall while upright lockers lined the other. There was one locker for every bed it looked like. Several of them had boy band pictures and the latest Disney star taped the shiny metal doors. Each of the ones that were occupied had the owner’s name stenciled on the upper corner of the right hand door. I was surprised to see my own name on one, and Marie’s name on the other.

“Man, you must work fast.” I nodded toward the lockers.

Kacee gave a short nod. “Mrs. Brindle expects us to be efficient.” The way she said it had the hairs on the back of my neck rising. Why did it seem like there was more than that?

“Guess there’s nothing wrong with being efficient,” I mumbled as I set down my bag on the bed across from the locker with my name on it.

“You’ll find your life will be much easier here if you do.” She gave us a smile. “Once you put your stuff away, I’ll take you down to the kitchen. We’ll be having lunch in less than a half hour and I can introduce you to the rest of the group.”

“Sure thing, Kacee.” Marie opened her bag and began to unpack. I still couldn’t shake the feeling that there was something more to Kacee than met the eye. Was she special like me and Marie or was she merely another orphaned girl?



©Becki Gylberte All rights reserved. This is a work of fiction. All names, characters, locations, and incidents are products of the author’s imagination, or have been used fictionally. Any resemblance to actual persons living or dead, locales, or events is entirely coincidental. No portion of this work may be transmitted or reproduced in any form, or by any means, without permission in writing from the author.

Review Tour: Falling Sky by James Patrick Riser

Today I'd like to welcome James Patrick Riser to my blog.  As the first guest on my blog in my partnership with Goddess Fish Promotions, I had the pleasure o reading Mr. Riser's book, Falling Sky. So please be sure to check at the end of the post to read my review of this book.  Also I would be remiss if I forgot to mention that Mr. Riser is also going to draw a random winner from the tour, so be sure to comment and follow the tour at the rest of the stops. (click on the tour graphic on the right for list of rest of stops)  He's offering a $10 gift certificate to Wild Publishing as a prize. 


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Blurb:
Following a devastating world war, the surface of the planet has been covered in a substance called Dust, a weapon that can break down the physical make up of entire cities, reducing them to rubble and preventing citizens from rebuilding their lost metropolises for several years. In order to survive, humanity has taken refuge in crowded, underground cities.

Ian Blum is a 15 year old boy living in one such city. His crippling social anxiety confines him to a solitary life at home, while his parents are away at their jobs. The person he interacts with the most is his home school professor, Michael Wasley. One night, Ian is visited by a mysterious figure in a dream. The man warns Ian of a great earthquake that will destroy the cities, killing all of the inhabitants. The man charges Ian with the task of getting everyone out.

Soon after, Ian finds out that he isn't the only one who has had this dream and reluctantly joins a group of rebels who has made it their mission to drive everyone from the cities for their own safety, however, no one believes in the stranger's prophecy. Ian and the rebels must find a way to get the people to safety at any cost.

Excerpt:
By the time the war shook society to its very core, it appeared that everyone had forgotten why the nations were so intent on ripping the planet apart. People knew the reasons of course; there were many of them, but most seemed convoluted to Michael. Reports of impending doom, as civilization began to collapse, drowned out his sixteenth birthday. The fallout from the war would eventually make it impossible for humans to live in the cities for much longer. Emigration to space was the most attractive solution to most; it was a persistent pipe dream ever since writers and filmmakers had presented it to the world as a possibility. A small group of politicians even pushed for the move to space without thinking about the constraints: The United States government completely dissolved the space program several years before to free up more funds that could be spent toward winning the war, and the limited number of people who could actually travel into space. The majority of the population would be left in the radioactive dust while the elite (which included the politicians that pushed for the move) would be among the stars, safe, but with nowhere to go.

Michael learned all of this over the course of several weeks from news programs and televised, one-sided debates. The Six Year War had effectively ended and every nation had lost to a dark cloud of bloodlust. During the first week of the new crisis, Michael wrote a journal to record the experience.


 AUTHOR Bio: 
James Patrick Riser is the author of Syndrome and Falling Sky, two novellas published by Wild Child Publishing. His short fiction has appeared in the, now defunct, online horror fiction magazine, Necrotic Tissue, and his poetry has appeared in the online poetry journals, Pif magazine, Dead Beats and Four and Twenty Poetry. He lives in Colton, California.






Becki's Review: 
I totally enjoyed Falling Sky by James Patrick Riser. He created a very believable set of characters in his story. I could totally relate to Ian, his main character, but also entirely enjoyed both the complex and multifaceted Mr. Wasley and enigmatic Prophet. I even enjoyed Katsuni. Mr. Riser created a very complex world that should satisfy the inner geek in all of us.. I love the creativity of the futuristic setting while still keeping true to some of our modern day conveniences. But what really struck me was the emotional struggle as Ian tried to figure out his place with the rebels while overcoming his own demons. In the end Falling Sky is a book I think any reader who enjoys an adventurous tale with a post apocalyptic setting. I give it 4 Playful Monkeys and look forward to reading more of Mr. Riser's work.


©Becki Gylberte All rights reserved. This is a work of fiction. All names, characters, locations, and incidents are products of the author’s imagination, or have been used fictionally. Any resemblance to actual persons living or dead, locales, or events is entirely coincidental. No portion of this work may be transmitted or reproduced in any form, or by any means, without permission in writing from the author.

Sunday Fun {3} - Bleached Tie Dye Beach Towels


Welcome once again to Sunday Fun.  This week, I scoured the net to find something fun and creative for my girls that I wouldn't have to go buy out half the craft store. That's when I found this nifty idea HERE*.  I remember as a teenager tie-dying shirts in home ec and believe me this craft is much easier - no expensive dyes to buy or anything.  And believe it or not, I had everything on hand!  

You'll need the following items:
  • Bleach and water
  • Squirt bottle
  • Colored towel
  • Rubber bands
  • Large bucket of water to rinse  
 
Teen Summer Craft Ideas Bleached Tie Dye Beach Towel
 STEPS
Step 1: Using the rubber bands, tie up the towel. Try various ways of twisting the towel to get different patterns. 

Step 2: Fill squirt bottle with a mixture of equal parts bleach and water.  Then spray the tied areas of the towel.  Let it sit for about a minute or til you see the bleach working.  Then use the bucket of clean water to rinse.  The article also mentions to use a separate bucket for each towel.

Step 3:  Then wash and dry the towels as usual.  


Finished Look: 
Teen Summer Craft Ideas Bleached Tie Dye Beach Towel 

 *This idea I got off of Parentingteens.about.com as well as the pictures.